Writing down your observations.
As we have watched a movie, ‘WALL-E’, this robot collects garbage which expanded in land and makes it small. Now the robot tries to press the Starbucks, which did over expand. To support the over expanding, the Starbucks is described on the Mars. This means the Starbucks has no place to open new store in the earth. This also explains that the Starbucks expand their business where no one comes.

A preliminary thesis statement
This cartoon focuses on the fact that the Starbucks expanded and now forces to close some of their branches.

Refining argument
How? Describing the Starbucks on the Mars
To what effect? Describing the garbage-collecting robot/ The Mars where the Starbucks find new place to open a store because of too many shops in the Earth and where no human being exists

Revising the preliminary thesis
The cartoon focuses on the reduction of the Starbucks by showing it on the Mars by using WALL-E, the garbage-collecting robot, which shows us that there are too many Starbucks in the Earth and also their poor business plan which opening a store at the place where nobody comes.

Further Polishing thesis
What do you find interesting about this observation?
Closing stores describes a poor business plan.
How does it tap into larger or social cultural issued?
Closing stores should have a big impact to consumers but this shows us that the over expending seems to be obvious and also seems to be so natural to close stores.

So what?
This cartoon shows Starbucks poor business plan by showing a store on the Mars which imply not only there are too many stores on the Earth but also Starbucks opens stores where no customer comes, by using WALL-E, the garbage-collecting robot, to emphasize the fact that they are forced to close stores.